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My Prison

                      
                                  It's like i am a prisoner

                                Only you can't see the bars,
                                food and water are provided,
                                    but can never satisfy,
                                    my thirst and hunger.

                               Thoughts and feelings come
                                   but are shadowed with the thought
                                 that he will never return.

                              I am suffering dearly
                               and the only answer is death.

                                 But,
                                   I will never give in,
                                 I will keep fighting for
                                          freedom,
                                from this horrible prison.

                                                  By: sexys girl
©2006-2009 ~sexysgirl
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Submitted: October 4, 2006
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Ok so this is one of the first poems I wrote. I was having a really hard time in my life 4 the past couple of years. I basically wrote it to express myself in a way that i had never tried and found that I was good at it. Comments please.
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its nice, just a little scary :/

Nah, It is very dark, But a good work none the less ;)
some really nice dark work here. I cant help reading it and seeing a movie in my head as i read its really awsome work and sounds brilliant went heard loud. a deffinate :+fav: well done :D

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thank u ^^

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Very Nice ;)

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